Good stuff, too. The deleted pages are in a messy pile on my office floor. It’s time to go lean. If I went back to earlier drafts I’m sure I could find a great bloopers reel worth of hilarious typos and awful sentences. Too bad this isn’t a movie. I’d be all ready for the bonus material section of the DVD. I should be done with all my edits in a week. Then back to Penguin it goes.